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Memorial Day
    The woman pressed her face against the headstone.  As tears left her eyes they met the cool hard granite and slid down into the grass.  She thought of him, the one she'd lost.  His face was right in front of her, she could see it.  His mouth was split into a grin that took up his whole face.  He laughed and reached a hand out to her.  She sobbed, knowing it was her mind playing tricks on her.  He was gone, and no amount of fantasizing would bring him back to her.  She would never feel his arms around her again, or know the joy of waking up next to him every day.  Her salty tears blurred her vision as she looked down at the wedding ring on her hand.  Her heart stumbled, and she half hoped she'd die right there so she could join him.  A tug on her pant leg reminded her of her reasons for staying.  She looked over and saw her twin girls looking at her.
    "Mommy, why are we here?  I don't see Daddy a
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Literature
Serenity
Sitting gently on a hill,
Letting the wind tug at her hair,
Peacefully she closes her eyes,
Listening to the sound of birdsong.
She lays her head on a pillow of clover,
In and out, she breathes in its clean scent.
Sleep overtakes her quickly,
Nothing disturbs her slumber.
A bird hums a quiet tune.
In its notes you hear her name.
She opens her eyes slowly,
Sweetly she smiles, sighing at the sky.
"Serenity," the bird whisper.
"Serenity," the heavens echo.
"Serenity," the wind whistles.
"Her name," they mutter, "is Serenity."
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Literature
4th of July
                D.C. woke up smiling.  Today was the Fourth of July!  She was so happy!  It had been 237 years since the United States of America had become a country.  She could hear America humming “The Star Spangled Banner” downstairs while he cooked breakfast.  This was the only day of the year that he did.  He was probably making waffles with strawberry syrup, whipped cream, and blueberries, so that even the waffles would be red, white, and blue.  She stretched and got ready, slipping on an Old Navy flag shirt and jean shorts.  She tied her hair back in a half ponytail and ran downstairs.  When she reached the bottom of the stairs, she tackled America yelling, “HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY!”
                He laughed and hugged her, replying, “And to you too!”  D.C. saw she’d been r
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Literature
Every Book Opens a Door
A woman stood in a room
From where she was standing she could see so many doors
Hundreds
    Thousands
        Millions of doors to new worlds
Worlds where she could be a knight of the Round Table,
A wizard learning magic,
Or a young detective solving crimes.
Each world was diverse and unique.
She opened one door,
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            L
                L
                    I
                        N
                            G
Into the world she had chosen.
When she was done with the world she had chosen
She shut the door.
And put the book back on the shelf.
Every book opens a door.
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Literature
Birds of a Feather
Birds of a Feather
I am a bird with bright green feathers
There is no one like me that I’ve met
I’m alone in the world
My opinions are my own
I have no one to share them with.
As I fly along in the jungle of my home
I see a flash of bright green feathers
It’s another bird
How can it be?
I am the only bird like me.
I fly up to the bird with the bright green feathers
That looks like a reflection of me
I notice small differences
Eyes, beak, talons, and tail
I guess we’re not exactly the same.
I talk to the bird that looks just like me for hours on end
Some of her opinions are very close to mine
We both love the color green
We both love to sing
With other things that are similar as well.
However some of the things we don’t agree on
Like when is the best time to sing
She says morning is best
I believe it’s the evening
So there are some differences there too.
She is my friend despite the differences
Each of us is our own bird
I’m not alone anymore
Ev
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Literature
The Pledge
I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of America and to the Republic for which it stands, one nation, under GOD, indivisible, with liberty and justice for all.
These words have power.
With our hand above our hearts we swear allegiance to the USA.
Some will take the Pledge lightly,
Saying it’s pointless,
Or annoying,
Maybe even stupid.
I don’t take it lightly.
When I say these powerful words I think of what they mean.
I am pledging my allegiance to my country, vowing to uphold what it stands for:
Liberty.
Justice.
And it’s for everyone.
This Pledge is not pointless, annoying, nor stupid.
We’re swearing our allegiance to a country that does have standards.
It’s our fault if these standards aren’t held as strongly.
Our country could be as strong as it was,
With our help to keep up the things that we know are right.
We don’t have to be an arrogant,
Stupid,
Idiotic nation as the world sees us,
If only we could keep the promise we made
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Literature
Listening to Wind
Swish,
Whisper,
Sigh…
The wind speaks in soft tones,
Swishing through the trees.
Whispering sweet things to leaves.
The wind sighs as it rushes by.
Swish,
Whisper,
Sigh…
The wind speaks to me.
It swishes,
Whispers,
And sighs in my ears.
Swish,
Whisper,
Sigh…
The wind is never content.
It swishes through the past
Whispers of the present,
And sighs for the future.
Swish,
Whisper,
Sigh…
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Literature
Have you ever seen me?
Have you ever seen me?
Truly seen me?
Sometimes nobody sees me.
I have feelings;
they can be hurt.
You don't see me.
Therefore you can't know
what hurts me
and what helps me.
What would you do
if nobody saw YOU?
Would you live with it;
or would you hide.
I know what I would do.
I would live with it.
Would you?
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How to Write Helpful Critiques/ Feedback
Now that I have been looking at several literature pieces a week, there aren't a whole lot of comments that provide the writers with feedback. So here's a guide that I thought might be useful for some people on how to provide helpful feedback and critiques.
Before I begin, I would like to say that I have been a part of a wonderful writing group for the past four years. The writing club is where I first learned how to do a critique. I have also been taught some critique techniques during my college studies. In addition to the writing club and college classes, I have been doing my best to leave helpful feedback and critiques here on deviantART. This guide is based entirely off of my personal experience. As I think of more tips, I will be editing this guide.
DO:
Bullet; Green  Make sure to respond to any questions they have asked in the artist's descriptions.
Bullet; Green Be sure to find out how experienced they are a
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Literature
Evening Ballad -- C
Shattered clocks,
and grains of sand
seep away.
Shadowy contours,
as the shrieks of owls
ricochet in the sky,
and the smile in your shoulders
is a sleeping silhouette
of whispers; constellations
weeping
for the gods in the stars.
The looming trees below
creak and sough
in harmony;
whilst wolves
howl their agony to the moon,
a night song of sussuration
and substance. You,
asleep, and beautiful, and full
(oh-so-full)
of stardust,
are your own aria.
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